2. Have a pice of work that is clear and positive
3. Have someone read it and correct anything that you thought was right.
Sunday, February 8, 2015
Storm Log - Ella E.
10:00AM
-inside55˚, outside23˚ (feels like 2!)
-blizzard conditions
-Eating French toast
11:00AM
-inside 57˚, outside 25˚
-Still blizzard conditions-snowing +windy
-sitting in dark cold reading with blankets
12:00PM
- inside57˚-outside 27˚
-snow flurries and wetness, high winds
-still no electricity playing Parcheesi
1:00PM
-inside 56˚, outside 24˚
- LOTS of xsnow in ground stormy and windy
-Eating eggs and still Parcheesi!
2:00PM
-Inside 54,outside 23˚
-snowing harder-blizzard conditions
- getting ready to go over to Lizzie and bucko's house so don't freeze tonight!!
3:00PM
-trying to bust out of snow drifts- locked in have car down at barn!
-55˚ -inside-outside 23˚
-snowy, trees down windy heavy snow
4:00PM
-over at Lizzie and Bucko’s house, staying the night, power is on! (at their house, not ours) > Power went out!
-23˚ outside, not ours\-Same as all day, yard covered in snow, beautiful but stormy
5:00PM
20 ˚ -outside
-cold or freezing snow, flurries, snow on ground
-looking on Instagram at Chris Burkehard, Amazing!
Power back on!
6:00PM
-19 ˚ outside
-Sitting relaxing in couch, power going on and off!
-Still snowing!
7:00PM
-Eating Wally’s Glop with power on, hopefully for permanent!
-Snowy/snowing dark nighttime
-19 ˚ (approximately)
8:00PM
-Watching Leap Year with ice cream
-Gusts up to 60mph
-15 ˚ (maybe)
9:00PM
-Watching movie with blankie
-It’s a blizzard!
-15 ˚
10:00PM
-finishing up movie
-Dark and stormy
-15 ˚
12:00
-Going to bed, cozy!
-can’t see outside anymore
Writers Workshop - Isobel C.
Step 1: Gather into a group
Step 2: Find a writer
Step 3: Get the article
Step 4:Read the article out loud
Step 5:Talk about the article only in a nice way
Step 6: Take the constructive criticsm and work on your article
Steps of a writers worksop! - Ava W.
Steps of a writers worksop!
1. Write of poem and or a short story.
2. Then create a group of 2-5 people.
3. You will read your short story or poem.
4. When you read you poem or story the group and yourself will check for mistakes.
5. Once you have edited it, yo will go on to the next person and then they will read and so on.
6. Make sure to tell the reader that you like their work and make sure to be thoughtful to the rest of the group when they all read.
- Ava
Writers Workshop - Jake T.
1. Gather in a group
2. Read someones prompt
3. Be sensitive (if its yours)
4. Think about the other people talking
5. Express yourself (if its yours)
6. Be supportive
7. Talk about the mistakes
From Jake
Writing Workshop - Ella E.
- Find a person who writes.
- Collect a writing piece from the person
- Speak the truth, but only supportive and positive words
- Listen when other people are speaking
- Think out of the box about people's writing possibilities
- Be inspired to write your own creative writing peice
Writing Workshop - JohnCarl M.
1.get writers with writing
2. gather them together
3.one author reads his or her work
4.the other authors say something they like about it and then offer helpful criticism.
5. don't say anything mean.
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